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Too late to change my mind

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Blood... Choking...
Were they worth it?...
This is the first six word story I post and it's for the 20th February - 5th March Theme Prompt at :iconsixwordstories: - Reluctant Truth.
Hope you like it! :)


29.02.2012 Any possible resemblance to other already existing six word stories is unintentional.
© 2012 - 2024 reggar
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3wyl's avatar
Woah... o.O

This is quite harsh, I have to say, in terms of imagery and concept. Like it's pretty gritty, if that makes sense?

I like how you have portrayed the atmosphere to us through the ellipses and the way you have ended the story with a question mark there.

I would suggest that the ellipses at the end goes before the question mark, but other than that, awesome stuff. :nod: