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Woah... o.O
This is quite harsh, I have to say, in terms of imagery and concept. Like it's pretty gritty, if that makes sense?
I like how you have portrayed the atmosphere to us through the ellipses and the way you have ended the story with a question mark there.
I would suggest that the ellipses at the end goes before the question mark, but other than that, awesome stuff.
This is quite harsh, I have to say, in terms of imagery and concept. Like it's pretty gritty, if that makes sense?
I like how you have portrayed the atmosphere to us through the ellipses and the way you have ended the story with a question mark there.
I would suggest that the ellipses at the end goes before the question mark, but other than that, awesome stuff.